TMA FORM (PT3e)  

  SECTION 1   STUDENT INFORMATION   SECTION 2   TUTOR INFORMATION
Name Training Student12
Address
OUCU stud12
EMail t.student12@hotmail.com 
Personal
Identifier
S0000012
Sent By
Student
22-Dec-2003
Course COM100 99 TMA No. 02
Tutor's Name Dr B Tutor-Two
Tutor's Number 88888882
Appointing Region R01 
Date Returned 22-Dec-2003
Question Grades/Scores Overall
Grade/Score
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 70
70


TUTOR'S COMMENTS AND ADVICE TO STUDENT:

This is a really good TMA. You've got the right balance of financial analysis and consideration of other strategic issues. It's extremely well written and will be an excellent revision tool for you to refer to.

There are one or two areas where your understanding of some of the concepts was a little weak - e.g. equity and asset betas and what the book value of a company means to its shareholders. However despite that you've pout together a very sound piece of work.

Whilst you've written the piece very well from the perspective of an independent reader, do make sure your format allows you to do full justice to all the requirements of the TMA. So I really wanted sections with headings related to the mark requirements - e.g. a heading relating to the expanded time horizon in question one and one relating to the shares and cash point in question 2. And in question one I needed more formally comments about what extra information would be helpful. Once you do that your marks could go up quite a bit.

Finally thank you for the helpful contribution you put up on first class. It's good when people can find the time to share their learning when they feel it can be of real benefit to others who are struggling.

Do get in touch if there is anything about the TMA you would like to discuss. I'll be putting up some feedback on the tutor group conference once I've marked all the assignments.

Cheers